Wow, you really took the baton and ran with it since I looked at this poem last. Still good, but maybe a little overdone. The play on words between the eye-rhyme of Keats and Yeates and the actual sound is completely lost. However, some of the new stanza's are also awesome.
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great work as usual. Hilarious. -seth
Wow, you really took the baton and ran with it since I looked at this poem last. Still good, but maybe a little overdone. The play on words between the eye-rhyme of Keats and Yeates and the actual sound is completely lost. However, some of the new stanza's are also awesome.
Yeah, I ran it by the last Cats meeting. Cate, Alden and I had a good time thinking up different rhymes. I'll prune it down for sure.
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